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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-17 05:03 AM


It's bloody lonely here
It's raining on me
All the flowers get bees
But what do I get
A bit of green in the summer
The bugs come to visit
But they are just dining out
Then I get sprayed
But only once a week
Got to keep the fridays free
And then a gentle breeze
And sun kissed lips for me
As my lovely bethroathed sunflower
Gently lies on me


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1 posted 2004-01-17 05:13 AM


awesome write!
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2 posted 2004-01-17 05:57 AM


Wow, that gave me a feeling behind an image. That was a wonderful piece. Thank you for the read.

Love,
Ladycat

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3 posted 2004-01-17 09:46 AM


What an intriguing perspective...thank you so much for sharing this!

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This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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