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Ben
Junior Member

since 2004-01-17

Posts 21

0 posted 2004-01-17 12:53 PM

Is hate a refection of man
Or is man a reflection of hate
Born within the walls of hells gate
As children sing life to an empty plate

Cobwebbed eyelids lye beneath a tired mask
As the fast fall in the race of the last
Lost in answers known as why
As the living live in the name of my

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-01-17 01:14 AM

Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly

Greeneyes~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-01-17 03:32 AM

A dark poem, indeed, but I think you are right that "my" is the biggest problem this world has today -- we forget our humanity and selflessness seems only for saints. But there are those and you'll see them here who are rays of sunshine! Welcome to Passions.

Ladycat

Senior Member

since 1999-07-05

Posts 782
At the edge and a doorway,TX

3 posted 2004-01-17 06:04 AM

That piece has some unique images in it and I truely enjoyed reading it.

Welcome to Passions!!! Take your shoes off and enjoy your stay!

Thank you for the read and keep writing. I will be looking forward to reading more.

Love,
Ladycat

Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most
beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation
or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE I

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-01-17 07:19 AM

Welcome to Passions,,,
Fast or slow, hate of,,,or from man,,,
all succumb in the end
Dark words
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-01-17 07:53 AM

Welcome to Passions, Ben! We're going to enjoy your writings. I hope you will have an opportunity to see our sharings, as well.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-01-17 09:14 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I know you will enjoy it here.
I look forward to seeing more of our work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-01-17 09:16 AM

Ben~
A hearty WELCOME to this circle of poets and friends~

Humanity causes speak through many of our pens ... looking forward to further poetic input from you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><
<EMAIL>noles1@totcon

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

8 posted 2004-01-17 12:15 PM

Dreary, teary, from those cobweb eyes. cobweb eyes, that is interesting and grotesque and perfect in this piece.

Welcome to Passions!

McLean

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2004-01-17 01:08 PM

Ben, I enjoyed reading your poem and
look forward to more of your work.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2004-01-17 04:50 PM

(big angel hugs) This is a dark but heartfelt debut, sweet friend, I believe we humans are the most evil of God's creatures, yet it is up to us, up to my, to shape the humanities of the world and if we can turn for the better we can seek salvation! God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ben, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ben, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Kristin Eve
Member

since 2004-01-13

Posts 89
On, Canada

11 posted 2004-01-17 04:57 PM

I like your poem!
Welcome to passions...
even though I myself have just recently kicked off my shoes!

"Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying"

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