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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-01-16 11:00 PM



Scatter me
in the sunflowers

surely there's
a place for me there

the lure to the earth
just eludes me now

not many can
decipher me here

the breeze on the meadow
the rain on the stream

free from entanglements
unheard and unseen



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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-01-16 11:04 PM


I understand -- and I really liked this poem -- a bunch!
Laoha
Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161
Nevada, USA
2 posted 2004-01-17 12:19 PM


"Scatter me
in the sunflowers"

What a concept! Loving it.

ctowen
Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2004-01-17 09:40 AM


always hiding to be yourself ....

     "come out, come out, wherever you are ... "

                     *S

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2004-01-17 12:33 PM


thanks guys

craigster, come on and find me........

bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
5 posted 2004-01-17 03:48 PM


shall we dance.....on a bright cloud of music shall we fly..........

nice job

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
6 posted 2004-01-17 04:01 PM


free from entanglements
unheard and unseen


Michele, I've found that I'm feeling more and more this way lately.....wanting to be "unheard and unseen" by everyone and everything....except Gary and Scooter. LOL It seems that no-one else understands exactly where I'm coming from.....

DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

7 posted 2004-01-17 04:40 PM


Scatter you within beauty of shining welcome
Dirty and welcome
Time to fray that cinch
Moving to a new season

Planted
Harrowed
Fed

I always like your words

Dave

PassionandFun
Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 60

8 posted 2004-01-17 11:44 PM


yes, of course, there is always a place for you!!
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
9 posted 2004-01-18 12:03 PM


thanks for reading
McLean
Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
10 posted 2004-01-18 12:17 PM


I used to dream of dancing around in the moonlight in a canteloupe field.  Almost forgot about that dream, thanks for bringing it back!

McLean

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
11 posted 2004-01-18 01:29 AM


there's a place somewhere for everyone
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