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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-01-16 08:58 PM


reMemory

Sometimes...
I forget your no longer there
Waiting...
Uncovering your wild blue eyes
Running...
Your hands through your brown, shaggy hair
But now...
All what's left, is your memory

-Juju-


© Copyright 2004 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-01-16 09:09 PM


I like all of this...the title
the emotion...
the thoughts.

J.Samm
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2 posted 2004-01-16 09:37 PM


i like the way you used brief, meaningful lines. shows a how a poet can be concise yet explicit...magic!
Juju
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3 posted 2004-01-16 09:55 PM


(Smile)

Juju

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-01-17 11:24 PM


Nice writing...James
McLean
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5 posted 2004-01-18 12:24 PM


I really dig the title, it's one of those very personal should be words.  This is good!

McLean

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6 posted 2004-01-18 01:34 AM


pretty cool
Juju
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In your dreams
7 posted 2004-01-18 08:35 PM


Thank you.
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