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0 posted 2004-01-16 04:39 PM


Before everyone thinks that I have lost my mind completely. This was a piece that a friend and I did at 3 am at Jim's in TX. We were tired and caffinenated and we didn't think that the piece would turn out so strange, but it did.

Hashbrown happiness in the cafe by the sea.
The waitstaff is a big headed red head.
Beating the drums with her head.
Sitting across the table from the one that daydreams of sledding Buddas.
His crown now laying on the floor next to the drums and ketchup.
A seahorse looks on in delight of all the fun.
As he eats his foot with a dash of salt and lime. And then starts to sing a bad love song by Cher.
As the Bear cooks in the midday sun.
BBQ'ing whale meat and the wings of bats.
The Red Lady sings while gargling water as the wind whistles the melody in the background.
A scene built for two with nothing more than children dreaming it all.
And I take another bite of my hashbrown happiness.

Love,
Ladycat and R. Weckel


Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most
beautiful of the arts, because it is no mere translation
or abstraction from life; IT IS LIFE I

© Copyright 2004 Vynette M. Charles-Brooks - All Rights Reserved
Michelle_loves_Mike
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1 posted 2004-01-16 05:29 PM


what were you having before the over caffination?
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
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2 posted 2004-01-16 06:40 PM


I think you must have had a very, very, very good time writing this!  LOL
GG
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3 posted 2004-01-16 08:06 PM


my thoughts are the same as michelle's...
lol.. crazy!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

DavePage
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4 posted 2004-01-17 04:52 PM


Nice to see someone really letting it go and having fun writing it

Nice imagery of the people

I wont asked what went in the coffee if it did, most weird stuff is done sober

We get too embarassed otherwise

I like it

Dave

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