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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2004-01-16 10:48 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#181

Copyright 2004 by:MARK V SHELDON


pausing passion
briefly
to tenderly caress

the imprint


your love left


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2004 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-01-16 10:50 AM


A very romantic write, Mark.
Thanks for sharing.  
  Ethel

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2 posted 2004-01-16 10:56 AM


Ah!  A huge *SIGH* for this one Mark!
Love the warmth this one produced.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Terrina
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3 posted 2004-01-16 11:26 AM


I haven't had a feeling like that with more than 20...thanks
MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2004-01-16 11:56 AM


Good morning, Ethel, and thank you for pausing.

Nancy, I thought you could use a little in your part of the world...

Terrina:  I don't think a feeling like that has a permanent number, but it always remains something to count on...  Thanks for stopping by.

-MVS

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5 posted 2004-01-16 12:30 PM


Of course..classic...

you know I enjoyed..


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6 posted 2004-01-16 12:32 PM


I love how you do these
ThUnDeRkYsS
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7 posted 2004-01-16 12:35 PM


Nice job Mark

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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8 posted 2004-01-16 01:27 PM


Mark -- BRAVO, BRAVO -- this was outstanding expression!
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9 posted 2004-01-16 01:39 PM


if I just said DAMN would that be enough?     this is so very softly sensual and extremeley lovely...

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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10 posted 2004-01-16 01:54 PM




PERFECT !!
hugs, Chris

MARK V SHELDON
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11 posted 2004-01-16 05:38 PM


Ron, it takes two to be parallel...  Thank you.

Much appreciated, Dixie.

ThUnDeRkYsS, I thank you.

Thank you iliana -- just a momentary thought which can last a lifetime...

Gentle Spirit, just to know that you read it would be enough, but to read that it resonated with you is extremely gratifying.  Thank you.

That's a mighty high compliment, Chris...  and I thank you for it.

-MVS

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