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Laoha
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0 posted 01-16-2004 08:47 AM       View Profile for Laoha   Email Laoha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Laoha

A golden leaf
fell
onto the shoulder of his
blue shirt,
out of the pondering,
he raised his puzzled face
up to look for its path
in the violet sky of the evening
as if to find the meaning of
this message.

This message
traveling at
the speed of the light
sent by
a gentle click.


2004-1-16
© Copyright 2004 Xiaoqing M. Li - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-16-2004 09:52 AM       View Profile for Michelle_loves_Mike   Email Michelle_loves_Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michelle_loves_Mike

Nice,,,,,
your style is so mellow, really enjoyed
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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2 posted 01-16-2004 09:57 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

understated and elegant...

nicely done
Laoha
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3 posted 01-16-2004 03:27 PM       View Profile for Laoha   Email Laoha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laoha

So glad to share my thoughts.
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4 posted 01-18-2004 03:54 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Enjoyed this very much -- you took something automated and mechanical and made it come alive!
Laoha
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5 posted 01-18-2004 04:43 AM       View Profile for Laoha   Email Laoha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laoha

Just another way of naration. I am learning.
McLean
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6 posted 01-18-2004 06:13 AM       View Profile for McLean   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for McLean

Aren't they great sometimes?  Interesting subject you've toyed with here.

McLean
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7 posted 01-18-2004 02:18 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Laoha~
I felt the all of this piece in the gentleness of your words~
LOVELY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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8 posted 02-02-2004 02:45 AM       View Profile for Laoha   Email Laoha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laoha

This poem was developed by trying to describe a scene in my mind into a ecard, I wish if only I knew how to make it.
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9 posted 02-22-2004 11:06 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

sigh

good write
Laoha
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10 posted 02-23-2004 12:02 AM       View Profile for Laoha   Email Laoha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Laoha

This piece is one of my favorites.
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