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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-01-16 08:17 AM


cry

       outside my window
   the wind flows

river and streams

  high

       far and wide, then low
    the winds blow

  shivering beams

try

      I toss, to and fro
    the winds grow

now she schemes

     I

     I am lost, sorrow
        yes or no

     in my dreams

  fly

    for come tomorrow
       none will know

    why wind screams

One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2004-01-16 08:23 AM


like this a lot.. the format and the message combined...

very nice work!

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2004-01-16 08:26 AM


Thanks Capt',

        Try as I might, I could not sleep last night with the cold winds here in the northeast, the new American Siberia!

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2004-01-16 08:48 AM


sometimes the winds can sound lost, keep in mind the breeze that flows and touches softly....hugssss


Me~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
4 posted 2004-01-16 11:22 AM


I loved the way you wrote this.

Jason

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