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serenities_blood
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0 posted 2004-01-16 03:46 AM



I say a differnce is what i'll make
but how many differences does it take to make more than just a difference in this world full of hypocrites and judgemental theives?
A difference could mean nothing to the majority of this narrow-minded society that we say we live happily in
We say we feel safe within the barriers of our temptations and restrictions
But do we live true to ourselves?
Do we live inside or outside this locked up world?
Those who live inside are those in power
those who believe whatever they say makes a difference when really more trouble and problems result from it
Those who's houses are broadcasted whenever they paint a new wall or buy a new rug, thinking those on the outside care
Those who were born not only with a silver spoon in their mouths, but also a silver knife
A knife that shows they arent perfect, and they never were or will be
Those on the outside are those who know but can never act on their resolutions or changes because they have been locked away without the chance to prove themselves
Those who believe in forgiveness and understand the warmth and comfort a love can give you
Those who are theives of time, who distil all who they pass
Those who also have seen the dark side of life and those who still believe darkness is the answer to the outside worlds problems
A difference is all it could take to break these invisible barriers between the worlds we know to be life.

xoxLORxox

Who says a woman cannot serve?
It would be my pleasure

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-01-16 03:50 AM


very philosophical
Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-01-16 10:00 AM


Pretty deep
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
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3 posted 2004-01-16 10:25 PM


Yes, I understand where you are coming form.  I believe you are correct!
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