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Masked Intruder
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0 posted 2004-01-16 03:35 AM



An invalid excuse for laying here
just crossed my mind.
Yet I can't picture it any other way.

-*-*-

Immortality is my illusion.

© Copyright 2004 Philip Zemler - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-16 03:38 AM


I can relate
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2 posted 2004-01-16 03:50 AM


so simple and so understanding

lol luv the pic

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It would be my pleasure

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3 posted 2004-01-16 08:27 AM


(chuckling)... I like this.. one can take it as humor or one can see a bit of understanding..or one can see sadness.. all depends on how it is read and what state of mind the reader is in...

nicely done!!!

Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-01-16 09:54 AM


I feel ya,,,,,sometimes, inertia is just to hard to overcome
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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5 posted 2004-01-16 10:05 AM


sigh.

Between you and Christopher I am convinced there is a camera hidden in my bedroom.




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