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Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
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Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 2004-01-16 02:13 AM



Who Are You?

Who are you?
That you can enter into my existence,
And with a glance melt my reserve.
.
Who are you?
That you can turn my life topsy-turvy,
With your romantic ways.
.
Who are you?
That you can remold my emotions,
With your gentle warmth.
.
You are the one,
Who stole into my dreams
Like a theif.
And all you stole was my heart.
Leaving me breathless from your kiss,
My senses reeling from your touch.
.
You are the one,
Who broke thru the darkness
Of my loneliness.
Shining brighter than the sun.
Blinding my vision with your radiance,
Filling my soul with passion.
.
You are the one.
Who has stood by me
Thru highs and lows.
Warming my world.
Melting away the pain of the past,
Gently giving me strength.
.
Enotneicna
SLW/SLR
1-14-04

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno



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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2004-01-16 02:28 AM


seems it is the one you love,
at least, the one who loves you
This is just beautiful!
It is a love story...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

serenities_blood
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 56
New Zealand
2 posted 2004-01-16 03:02 AM


Wow!
You have blown me away. I am saving your name so i can look in the future for more amazing works of arts you create. And, for the record, please do!!!
I am a young poet and you truly inspired me. Thankyou you so much.
Love always, Lor.

xoxLORxox
Don't walk so close, Don't breath so soft, Don't talk so sweet, Don't sing, Don't lay so near and please don't let me fall in love with u a

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-01-16 03:35 AM


beautiful indeed
Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA
4 posted 2004-01-16 03:38 AM


Alyssa.....yes a love story for the one I love and who loves me.....so glad you enjoyed!!!!!!!!


Lor.....to inspire another is a wonderful thing......you can find more of my work by doing a search using my name in the smart search heading across the top of the page....enjoy!!!!!!!!



Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno



Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2004-01-16 02:19 PM


MyFriendMyFriend~
This love looks soooooooooo good on you~
Love the all of this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><
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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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6 posted 2004-01-16 03:27 PM


Enotneicna -- sounds like you've got a keeper there!  I liked the poem -- a question and then the answer!

Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA
7 posted 2004-01-16 07:20 PM


passing shadows......thank you

Marge....Dear Sisterfriend......yes I agree this love does look good on me......I was happy with our lives before the wedding, but now everyone says I light up whenever I speak of us.........and it's true...it's just that much better!!!!!!!

iliana......A keeper......you bet!!!!!  they broke the mold when they made him!!!!!!!!!!!!
so glad you enjoyed!!!!

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno



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