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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ There is no time left to undo it wanes in the silence of indifference filled by a long distant loneliness half past Sunday afternoons. I no longer look beyond my tired eyes blinded by the winter sunlight slowing down the passing belated in my sorrow. Leaves my mourning stark in an attempt to find a higher ground and surround myself with something more than this. Where time pauses in place letting go, let it ride the winds are drawn to scarlet sighs against my will, never mine. This time is harder still as waves roll back and blue leaving bruises on my heart crash against your heart. Given time will heal and maybe never. ~*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Where time pauses in place letting go, let it ride the winds are drawn to scarlet sighs against my will, never mine." yessssssssssssssssssss... I could relate to this Bluesy. I've spent a lot of time mourning the passing of much that was never mine to begin with... sorrowful, but lovely |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Bluesy...bittersweet. Much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Bluesy...intense write! Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"I no longer look beyond my tired eyes blinded by the winter sunlight slowing down the passing belated in my sorrow. Leaves my mourning stark in an attempt to find a higher ground and surround myself with something more than this." This is just amazing. I felt it, and understood it. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh this does hurt to read! Makes me want to go off by myself for a while.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"This time is harder still as waves roll back and blue leaving bruises on my heart crash against your heart. Given time will heal and maybe never." I hope....... "will heal"........will be the case. ......hugs, jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know this one got me good |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Love's undertow is such a drag! If the tide is right, you, too, can be moving on. Here's to full moons and low tides! *S |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
indeed, sometimes, you just have to let it go Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Leaves my mourning stark in an attempt to find a higher ground and surround myself with something more than this. Where time pauses in place letting go, let it ride the winds are drawn to scarlet sighs against my will, never mine. This time is harder still as waves roll back and blue leaving bruises on my heart crash against your heart. =========================== Oh girl this is a melancholy, bittersweet beauty... On a day when we feel like this...all we can do is write it out...and listen to all our old Jackson Browne...this write is a "Late for the Sky" kinda day.  Nature poets can't walk across the backyard without tripping over an epiphany. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey you  sometimes I just hang around and wait so that I can take you to the top for another round of reads... I always enjoy your deep thoughts, Lori catch you later this weekend... M |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Your skill, already awesome, continues to grow. This is wonderful work. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Where time pauses in place letting go, let it ride the winds are drawn to scarlet sighs against my will, never mine." Sing it Bluesy...  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Lori, this is lovely, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way as I know you will find something special of your own that you'll hold dear forever, yay! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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