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dinky
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0 posted 2004-01-15 06:49 PM


she wants him back,
you know she does.
she broke him,
now she's broke without him.
he's finally over her,
and now she;s trying to hurt him again,
so she's not the only one with pain.
but you won't let her back,
he's too good for her.

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singapore
1 posted 2004-01-17 12:23 PM


short but intense
dinky
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2 posted 2004-01-17 03:55 PM


thx
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3 posted 2004-01-17 04:11 PM


You conjured a lot of unsaid emotions

Someone once wrote "she just couldn't wait to get him home to ignore him again"

Dave

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germany
4 posted 2004-01-17 04:20 PM


wow!!! that explains just the situation i am in right now. wonderful! i'm really touched!

turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again...

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5 posted 2004-01-17 09:57 PM


thx so much for the replys it means a lot.

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