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pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2004-01-15 06:19 PM

i
gracefully accepting
irrational amplitude
to avoid attitude

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2004-01-15 06:44 PM

i liked this
it was short but meaningful
good write

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-01-15 07:50 PM

very interesting. Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2004-01-15 09:19 PM

uh...dunno...irrational amplitude usually gives me attitude, with grace having very little to do with it

good write, as always. enjoyed.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2004-01-15 10:44 PM

Like peas and carrots, I usually GET IT. Great write, I've been missing yours.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2004-01-16 12:01 PM

Seeing this in four ways that I think of offhand...and they all work, including the one that's funny.

You have a gift for unstating the unobvious.

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iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-01-16 01:13 AM

I liked it. And, I think I get it. If I do get it, I like it. The way I see it is that too much praise could be dangerous, right?

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

7 posted 2004-01-16 01:19 AM

AWESOME...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-01-16 03:28 AM

give me attitude any day...I'm up for it

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

9 posted 2004-01-16 05:27 AM

And Dixie means it! great write.

Jason

Singularity
Junior Member

since 2004-01-16

Posts 10
Sunny California

10 posted 2004-01-16 06:07 AM

Interesting style you've got, there; very minimalist.

Not my style, but then, that's not the point of poetry.

Good effort, dude. Lots of feeling in not a lot of words.

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