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jaicie114
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0 posted 2004-01-15 11:29 AM



You are bathed
in moonlight…
Softly radiant,
as the love pours forth
from your very core.

I send a whisper
To your ear…
Lightly…
Gently…
Not to disturb
The serenity of now.

You turn…
Answer my siren’s song,
as we know we are One.
.
.
.
Thank you, Marti...for your wonderful inspiration of moonbeams and the photo you included with your exquisite poem.

Love and Light...jc


This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-01-15 11:33 AM


Beautiful...as is Marti's inspirational post.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

jaicie114
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2 posted 2004-01-15 11:37 AM


Thank you, Nancy!  Yes...Marti seems to have affected a lot of us today!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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3 posted 2004-01-15 11:46 AM



You've got to smile when inspiration is shared.  Well done, jaicie!

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2004-01-15 12:21 PM


jc ~~ Thank you so much!!!! I am thrilled that I was able to inspire you to write that wonderful piece of poetry. Despite record cold here in the Northeast, the sun is shining today and last night's moon was spectacular.

Hugs and luvs, Marti

iliana
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5 posted 2004-01-15 12:28 PM


Jaicie114 -- In a word, "breathtaking!"
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6 posted 2004-01-15 12:59 PM


beautiful
VAS
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7 posted 2004-01-15 01:26 PM


pretty thoughts

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2004-01-15 01:27 PM


jaicie114
Enjoyed the read.

garysgirl
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9 posted 2004-01-15 01:33 PM


I send a whisper
To your ear…
Lightly…
Gently…
Not to disturb
The serenity of now.


Very beautiful, jc.
  Ethel

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10 posted 2004-01-15 09:15 PM


Jaicie~
VERY nice inspiration !!!
If it has to do with the moon ... I'm in favor of that~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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11 posted 2004-01-15 09:46 PM


so softly beautiful...lovely write
BluesSerenade
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12 posted 2004-01-15 09:53 PM



You inspire nicely,  jaicie~
Really loved this whisper of a song~

jaicie114
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13 posted 2004-01-15 09:59 PM


Oh my goodness, everyone!  Thank you!

Karilea, Marti, iliana, Dixie, VAS, Seymour, Ethel, Marge, steavenr, and Bluesy....I'm so thrilled that you liked this little write! Marti's poem and photo were just too inspirational to let the moment pass!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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14 posted 2004-01-15 10:46 PM


I love this!! Well done ! hugs, Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4



    

jaicie114
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15 posted 2004-01-16 07:06 AM


Thanks, Chris...I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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