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choshi
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0 posted 2004-01-15 10:48 AM



Through the window glass
in the sunlight's soft pale rays
warmth spreads on my face-
as ice floats on the river
and thoughts give way to dreams.

© Copyright 2004 Paul C. Cooper - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-15 11:07 AM


soft & lovely. thankyou for this. Chris

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that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4



    

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2 posted 2004-01-15 11:09 AM


captured moment..and the transition of thought to dream... with the metaphor fo sun and ice.. nicely done..
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3 posted 2004-01-15 11:17 AM


Mesmerizing!  Thank you, Paul!

Love and Light...jc

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choshi
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4 posted 2004-01-15 01:27 PM


From Nightshade:

soft & lovely. thankyou for this. Chris

YOu are welcome Chris I am appreciating your comments and find inspiration in your poetic voice  ~C

choshi
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5 posted 2004-01-15 01:29 PM


From Cpat Hair: "captured moment..and the transition of thought to dream... with the metaphor fo sun and ice.. nicely done.. "

Thank you CH for the compliment and for your perceptive and sensitive reading...~C

choshi
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6 posted 2004-01-15 01:31 PM


JC wrote: "Mesmerizing!  Thank you, Paul!

Love and Light..."

You welcome and thank you jc....~C

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7 posted 2004-01-15 04:55 PM


Through the window glass
in the sunlight's soft pale rays
warmth spreads on my face-
as ice floats on the river
and thoughts give way to dreams.

through the smiling sun
we are all as beautiful
in her window view

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8 posted 2004-01-15 04:56 PM


very gentle write...
just beautiful.

take care,
Amy

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iliana
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9 posted 2004-01-15 04:59 PM


Choshi -- I agree totally with Capt Hair -- in my mind's eye, I could actually see the expression on the face!  ......hugs
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10 posted 2004-01-15 06:57 PM


Nice...James
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11 posted 2004-01-20 11:26 AM


*glowing*
it's so easy to see the imagery in all you write, this one is no exception (but it certainly is exceptional!)

Dawn

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Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2004-01-20 11:28 AM


Glad someone brought this back up as I missed it!  

And I do so like your stuff!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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13 posted 2004-01-20 12:05 PM


Short, sweet and full of life and feeling... beautiful imagery too!  Thank you for this

Brian

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14 posted 2004-01-20 12:41 PM


very inspiring!

what a scene!

choshi
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15 posted 2004-01-20 03:34 PM


through the smiling sun
we are all as beautiful
in her window view

yes, oh yes!

choshi
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16 posted 2004-01-20 03:36 PM


Aimster:

very gentle write...
just beautiful.

take care,
Amy

Aww, thank you Amy...~C

choshi
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17 posted 2004-01-20 03:39 PM


Iliana:

Choshi -- I agree totally with Capt Hair -- in my mind's eye, I could actually see the expression on the face!  ......hugs

Iliana, dear, well, then who am I to disagree...then you know this face is smiling,,,,[*hugs* back...]~C

choshi
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18 posted 2004-01-20 03:40 PM


Nice...James

Thank you James.... ~C

choshi
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19 posted 2004-01-20 03:43 PM


*glowing*
it's so easy to see the imagery in all you write, this one is no exception (but it certainly is exceptional!)

Aww...Muted, now you have me *glowing* too, and enjoying your playful use of words  ~C


choshi
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20 posted 2004-01-20 03:45 PM


Glad someone brought this back up as I missed it!  

And I do so like your stuff!
"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel"

Thank you Susan...I really like your quote ~C

choshi
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21 posted 2004-01-20 03:46 PM


Thank you for this

Brian


...you welcome Brian...and thank you for your kindness  ~C

choshi
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22 posted 2004-01-20 03:49 PM


very inspiring!

what a scene!

Thank you Dixie, and now you have me on the edge of my seat eager to see what evolves from your inspiration...[inspiration is a certainly a two-way street] ~C

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23 posted 2004-01-21 08:52 AM


Helo,
Its hard keeping track on here its so fast,
I wanted to read some of your work.
This is quite lovely perfect flow you are a good writer.
regards Richard.

choshi
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24 posted 2004-01-21 01:09 PM


Thank you Richard, its nice to be meeting you...yes things do move fast, such creativity flowing forth...still not used to it myself....~C
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25 posted 2004-01-21 11:37 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, I love your stained-glass fantasies you create from your words, sweet friend, you are a true artist in all magical forms, God Bless You, may you always look through murano-glass goggles, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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