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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-01-15 10:40 AM



Obstruction

there are
silver cords
wrapped around
silence
and if tugging
would somehow
unbind them
in release
I would
scratch away
at close
tangled knots
to separate
the threads
and once again
be free


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-01-15 10:53 AM



Ah...
she IS back!

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-01-15 10:54 AM


wonderful  Helen...and I hope you get that free feeling soon~~

M

garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-01-15 10:55 AM


Helen, I am so glad to see you here!!
Glad you are feeling better.  
Hugs  
Ethel

ctowen
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4 posted 2004-01-15 12:00 PM


Helen

    Always a pleasure. Here's to strong and healthy nails!
    *S

iliana
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5 posted 2004-01-15 12:36 PM


Good to see you are up and at'em.  Ditto all the above comments. And, lots of good wishes your way!
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6 posted 2004-01-16 01:06 AM


You're free already: to scratch.....or not...

I hope you do, because it's really the only way. And sometimes it does win that other freedom -- I know it well.

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
7 posted 2004-01-16 01:36 AM


She never left, at least not in my mind. The words
always
echo.

Kristin Eve
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8 posted 2004-01-16 02:10 AM


i REALLY like your style. I have read a few of your poems... they are all quite brilliant.

"Who you are speaks so loudly...I can hardly hear what you are saying"

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