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McLean
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state of marital bliss

0 posted 2004-01-15 10:07 AM


A click of the mouse,
   and what do I see?
A clandestine canvas
   that's waiting for me.

From my paint brush of conscious
   and alphabet pen
flow artistic releases
   of what lies within.

Many color my world
   with pictures, disguised
in beautiful shades
   of crossed t's and dotted i's.

The poems on these pages
   take me places unseen.
They teach me life's lessons,
   show me things I've but dreamed.

They give me laughter when needed
   or a crying good cleanse,
offer compassionate strokes,
   and a gaggle of friends.

Here creators are welcomed
   to click any time
and find great salvation
   in these pages, clandestine.

I really love it here.  Creation of this nature is truly underrated.  Not all addictions are bad, right?  



© Copyright 2004 McLean - All Rights Reserved
Nightshade
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just out of reach
1 posted 2004-01-15 11:09 AM


I love it here too McLean.
This is a lovely tribute poem.
Hugs, Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4



    

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
2 posted 2004-01-15 11:47 AM


I'm glad you enjoy this place.  I enjoyed your write and hope to read more.

believe in what your heart feels...

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2004-01-15 11:50 AM


LOL great tribute!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-01-15 11:55 AM


absolutely right!  Very much enjoyed reading this...thank you
iliana
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5 posted 2004-01-15 12:37 PM


McLean -- Wonderful poem; I really enjoyed it and AIN'T IT THE TRUTH!
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-01-15 12:48 PM


yep, I've been here forever and love it like home
garysgirl
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7 posted 2004-01-15 05:44 PM


Here creators are welcomed
   to click any time
and find great salvation
   in these pages, clandestine.


This is a great place, isn't it?
I love it, too!!
Ethel  

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2004-01-16 04:38 PM


You penned it perfect, my thoughts exactly~

yes i am addicted to PIP too~

LOL ~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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9 posted 2004-01-16 05:58 PM


McLean~
Wonderful ... and addiction ... nah ...
PASSION !!!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><
<EMAIL>noles1@totcon

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2004-01-16 06:03 PM


Wonderful write..
and this is the good kind of addiction!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Bonnie j
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11 posted 2004-01-24 10:29 AM


This place is a non-fat, no carbs, no sugar, no cholestrol kind of place. Great addiction.
See Ya Bon-Bon

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