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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 2004-01-15 08:54 AM



She seeks the comfort
of his scent
the real of his skin

She reaches for fulfillment
of a void
that can’t be found within

He pulls her close
and whispers
of a beauty made from two

He wraps his fingers in her hair
gently giving
lust, loves point of view

She gasps in shock
for a depth
in life so far unknown

She wraps herself
around the whole
of what has to her been shown

Together secrets they impart
breathing...
rhythm of primal

becomes…

one beat of heart




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bslicker
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1 posted 2004-01-15 09:00 AM


lovely write susan
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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2 posted 2004-01-15 09:02 AM


Beautiful write Susan...
softly sensual..much enjoyed.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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3 posted 2004-01-15 09:06 AM


nicely done... it would seem being in love sits well on your muse...
now, where is his?

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2004-01-15 09:11 AM


Thank you Bernie and Nancy!

Ron~He has been "serving and protecting" for the last 3 days...

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

iliana
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5 posted 2004-01-15 09:59 AM


Good morning, Susan!  This is really so good!  Have a good day.   ........jo
Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-01-15 02:52 PM


Thank you Jo!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

stevebrklynnyc
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7 posted 2004-01-15 03:38 PM


Sue, I can only aspire to write as well as you.  That poem was really beautiful.  I am working on a response.  Give me a little bit of time.  Your much better at this than me.  ILY!  Steve
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8 posted 2004-01-15 03:50 PM


Awwww, this is so sweet. I love seeing
people in love.....especially when
both of them are. It's beautiful.

Oh, and I loved your poem, Susan.

Ethel

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9 posted 2004-01-15 06:35 PM


Susan- I was going to say this is a perfect chick poem...but I see the guys like it just as well. It is beautiful and so sensual.
Y

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10 posted 2004-01-15 06:40 PM


this was so good,
i greatly enjoyed reading it!

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11 posted 2004-01-15 06:42 PM


oh my...

Pardon me by I think your love is showing, lady, and oh yes, it does look good on you.




inkedgoddess
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12 posted 2004-01-15 09:10 PM


sensual and smoldering, very nice
Kristin Eve
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13 posted 2004-01-16 01:37 AM


i love the sexuality in this poem... and i think it has a very interesting title!

I've been browsing for your poetry the last couple days...out of curiosity. I found what I expected from you...

beautiful expression.
Thanks for sharing!

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14 posted 2004-01-16 03:25 AM


very hot!
Jason Lyle
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15 posted 2004-01-16 05:26 AM


Sexy and well done.Love this.

Jason

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16 posted 2004-01-16 06:01 AM


Heavy stuff; both literally and literarily.
choshi
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17 posted 2004-01-16 06:48 AM


Beautiful passion and irony...~C
Brad Majors
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18 posted 2004-01-16 08:02 AM


wonderful write Susan. Its good to see you so happy
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