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Open Poetry #30
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rainydaymusic
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since 2004-01-14
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0 posted 2004-01-15 08:49 AM


If anyone reads, let me know what you think.  

Chemical Smile

Warm milk in a saucer,
lap at it,
it makes you feel better.
I swear there is
sheer delight to discover,
your body is soft like mine.

Now I've seen beauty become.

Don't bleed all over our bed that
we made, and,
ignore these chemical smiles
rushing through my brain. And
across my face.

Awkward and bone thin,
your imperfect skin,
cream colored egg shells,
cigarettes and gin.

And I've seen beauty become,
again.
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Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793
1 posted 2004-01-15 08:57 AM

an interesting mixture of image and thoughts.. not sure I get it completely..but it does cause me to pause and ponder..
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