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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-01-14 11:43 PM


God Tonite


If I could be
God tonite,
I'd make sure
that you kissed
me and held
me tight.

But what would
tomorrow nite
bring...
A slap,
a scream,
rejection,
broken dreams?


JamesLee
January14
2004

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jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
1 posted 2004-01-15 12:01 PM


Never, my Dear...promise!

Good write! Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-01-15 07:39 AM


Good write,,,,,,funny tho,,,when it comes to "god",,,the "next night" seems to be the norm.
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

rainydaymusic
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3 posted 2004-01-15 08:41 AM


It's great.. in my head, it starts off quiet and the end, picks up pace.  I like it a lot.
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2004-01-17 06:55 PM




(smiles) Rather believe always that He has a plan even when something falls apart unforunately and by believing you will find all the burden lifted, yay! (big angel hugs) I send hope angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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