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2writeis2be
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since 2004-01-11
Posts 45
Live in London, but from TX

0 posted 2004-01-14 06:05 PM


feel like a crippled person
lame
whose only movement is his
mind
stuck in this lifeless body
potential energy
but I want to be kinetic
cementing myself
disinclined/intimidated to live
yet longing to take the big step
forward
it’s all just thinking
dreaming
wondering
sometimes it drives me
crazy
I want out
to venture
see things
experience
something
if I could get up and
go
but I can’t
stuck
confused
scared
directionally-disabled
what is it I want (?)
got to find out soon
I’m so
bored



[This message has been edited by 2writeis2be (01-15-2004 07:55 AM).]

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Ravenwolfvoyager
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since 2003-12-25
Posts 326

1 posted 2004-01-14 07:47 PM


Each day presents its own challanges. A great capture of the reminiscence that goes on through our minds as we ponder life
marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
2 posted 2004-01-14 08:02 PM


I can only imagine this as spoken word and how it would affect your audience--nicely done
Michelle_loves_Mike
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since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2004-01-15 07:42 AM


Gets your point accross. Even tho I am not a huge fan of the word "crippled", it does get over how inert you feel.
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2004-01-16 04:25 PM


Think you've taken the first steps to fixing the boredom problem!  Welcome to Passions!
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