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garysgirl
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0 posted 2004-01-14 03:03 PM



  
Graphic By Twisted
From Artistic Stylings Of Twisted Serenity      

~~**~~
When we fell in love
our whole mindset changed
All of our thoughts from before
were suddenly rearranged

Before we thought of ouselves
of what  ~I~  desired to do
Now we think of each other
of pleasing and caring for  ~you~

It makes a difference in our lives
of the days and nights we live
Instead of wanting to receive all the time
now our greatest joy is to give

Making sure the other is happy
with all needs and desires taken care of
Definitely changing our outlook on life
we think first of our dear Love
~~**~~





© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-14 03:04 PM


that is how it should be Ethel...
very well done....

garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-01-14 03:11 PM


Thank you so much, Donna.
I really appreciate you, my friend.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-01-14 03:35 PM


nice
McLean
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state of marital bliss
4 posted 2004-01-14 03:49 PM


R O M A N T I C A L!

love this!

McLean

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5 posted 2004-01-14 08:26 PM


You truly are Garys Girl. It is nice to see that love still lives and through your work we will not soon forget of the wonderments that love can bestow to us. Thank you Ethel. A wonderful write!!
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6 posted 2004-01-14 08:33 PM


So very beautiful Ethel.  Your love is so clearly evident in everything you write.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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7 posted 2004-01-14 08:44 PM


Beautiful, Ethel -- this is what it's all about!
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8 posted 2004-01-14 08:44 PM


Good one as usual Ethel
bernie

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9 posted 2004-01-14 09:17 PM


Oh so beautiful as always Ethel...
And it should be just the way you say here.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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10 posted 2004-01-14 09:42 PM


sigh....another beautiful romance...

hugsss lady

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

jaicie114
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11 posted 2004-01-15 12:15 PM


I'm with Greeneyes, Ethel...

::sigh::

It is soooo nice to know someone who is truly this much in love...thank you for sharing that feeling with us!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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12 posted 2004-01-17 07:02 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, and may your heart become "both of yours" heart forever, yay! (kiss on cheek) Your love poetry always makes my heart smile, dreaming of when I may have a dream girl in the future, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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