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Laoha
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0 posted 2004-01-14 07:32 AM



Sudden enlightenment
of truth is
a necessity to reach
the other shore
of the ultimate happiness
that is deep inside
one's heart.

2004-1-14

© Copyright 2004 Xiaoqing M. Li - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2004-01-14 08:22 AM


beautiful and so true, it's all there all we've got to do is open the doors and walk thru
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-01-14 08:24 AM


Laoha
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

Laoha
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3 posted 2004-01-15 02:00 AM


Thanks. Very happy to see you two enjoyed reading my piece.

I have a lot to learn about the English, especially so structured to be concise and precise.

Severn
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4 posted 2004-01-24 06:30 AM


My turn to hunt...

K

McLean
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state of marital bliss
5 posted 2004-01-24 07:16 AM


You got that right!  A+ on stating a hard to describe given.  

McLean

Laoha
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6 posted 2004-01-25 02:20 AM


I appreciate it.
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