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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-01-13 07:39 PM



Picture by Jim Warren

* * *

The boats bob up and down
As I walk along the bay
The wind begins to change direction
And I feel the ocean spray

The seagulls start to circle
As they herald in the storm
I pull my coat around me
In an effort to keep warm

The boats begin to sway
Lurching from side to side
As the waves come into shore
On the incoming tide

I seek shelter in a boatshed
Just as the rain begins to fall
The waves lurch even higher
As they scale the sea wall

The storm doesn't last for long
And soon the sky begins to clear
I see a rainbow in the distance
And people walking on the pier

Soon the light of day will fade
And the night will replace day
I'll sit and watch the twinkling lights
Reflecting out across the bay


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-13 08:28 PM


Sue~
My gawd .... this is LOVELY, LOVELY, LOVELY~
You are soooooooooooo talented and I thank you for being a poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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iliana
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2 posted 2004-01-13 08:34 PM


Oh, Sue, to be there!  As always, you took me with you.
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3 posted 2004-01-18 09:51 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I wish I was there enjoying the lights on the Australia coast, sweet friend, it must be so gorgeous down there, yay, I wanna go, hehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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4 posted 2004-01-18 09:59 PM


Sue, your poems are always such a joy to read. They are always so beautiful.
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-01-18 10:20 PM


The view through your eyes is magical Sue.
TD

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6 posted 2004-01-19 12:15 PM


Sue,
You know, my favorite poets are still my favorite poets. A nice write. I love the water and I love your poetry. It was nice to see you in print too.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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7 posted 2004-01-19 04:42 AM


ditto all above me here
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8 posted 2004-01-19 07:56 AM


So descriptive and beautiful!

Eric

Goodknight
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9 posted 2004-01-21 09:43 AM


so lovely Sue - just loved this - Paul
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10 posted 2004-01-21 09:57 AM


Suetang
This is a lovely, lovely. In this it seems you left the door of your soul a litte ajar.
Thank you.

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11 posted 2004-01-21 09:58 AM


this picture is stunning as are your words Sue.  I very much enjoyed this lovely write!

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12 posted 2004-01-21 10:16 AM


nice read
Suetang
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13 posted 2004-01-21 03:36 PM


Your comments truly warm my heart for which I thank you.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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14 posted 2004-01-21 10:26 PM


Sue: A wonderful description of the shore and the storm.  I felt like I was there too!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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I'm going to the beach at the end of this month with my church... now you're making me even more excited to go!
The displayed it with such beauty love it.
Take care...
Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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16 posted 2004-01-21 10:30 PM


This is very beautiful....I see the images so clearly!!!!
It makes me long to be near the oceans so I can hear the waves and the seagulls.  It calms my soul!!!!
Take Care!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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