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rabab
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since 2003-12-23
Posts 8
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2004-01-13 05:25 PM



The stage is set
for the righteous fight.
Gathered, with my just friends;
Against the hordes of evil men.

All of us good friends,
shoulder to shoulder to fight our foe.
Eyes filled with hate of those,
who stand for the evil cause.

Pledged ourselves to our cause
which is good that I know.
Fists clenched on our swords,
for the hatred of the men
who stands against us all.

Together with all my friends
lined against the evil men.
Anger in our faces all you could see,
for those savages who are vile.

Waiting for our trumpet to sound,
so all us brothers could march upfront.
Leaving behind the smell of death,
Of the savages that are dead.
Their huts ablaze by our torch,
their Women bound for our joy.
Waiting for our sign to strike
For our brothers to set the world right.

© Copyright 2004 Kazi Muhaimen Ahmed - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-01-13 05:29 PM


Very visual writing and reminded me of movies I've seen of Greek wars!
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