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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-01-13 12:29 PM




hope kept love alive

memories traded cheaply

fade passion in time

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Terrina
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1 posted 2004-01-13 12:30 PM


This was wonderful
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2004-01-13 12:31 PM


nicely done sir...


Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2004-01-13 12:39 PM


Once I hoped for love,
but in time I came to know
the moon is silent.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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displaced
4 posted 2004-01-13 12:46 PM


indeed, a blustery view
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2004-01-13 01:37 PM


If only there were a way to shade it perfectly again...
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-01-13 01:40 PM


Perfectly penned sir.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-01-13 02:11 PM


icebox
Now that was well penned.

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8 posted 2004-01-14 01:18 AM


Tough but feeling, muscular but gentle...a perfect way for a man to address this, in poetry or in life.

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iliana
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9 posted 2004-01-14 01:21 AM


Words of wisdom for us all -- so true.  Well scripted!  
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