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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-01-13 10:19 AM



Only this would be
enough.

To simply tremor in the
want of my design.

And to know that somewhere...

You tremor in return.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
McLean
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state of marital bliss
1 posted 2004-01-13 10:20 AM


earthquake, baby!  

McLean

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2004-01-13 12:07 PM


"You Shook Me All Nite Long"

Shake...shake..shake...

Whew!

Ask and ye shall receive! LOL

~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-01-13 12:47 PM


you always shake me
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2004-01-13 01:36 PM


I promise I won't make a pun!

I liked this very much.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-01-13 01:41 PM


Excellent write Eric!
Perfectly penned.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-01-13 02:05 PM


Ericc
It woud do for me to. LOL Well done.

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
7 posted 2004-01-13 02:42 PM


Ahhh, dear One...you tease us so. What delicious responses this piece of art could evoke!  I'll leave it simply as thank you...as always, it's a thrill to find you posting!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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8 posted 2004-01-14 11:10 AM


Oh, yes. *S* What a beauty this is... and what truth. *S*
iliana
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9 posted 2004-01-14 11:23 AM


Ericc, nice one -- very passionate!
Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2004-01-14 12:54 PM


To each even tiny tremor
of your heart,
Universe provides an answer,
it's the law of love.


Somewhere ... yes, this is gorgeous. No doubt, your words move something ... somewhere.
I love you. Margherita

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11 posted 2004-01-14 12:56 PM


Eric, again I say, you put so much
in so few words, and I love it!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

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