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Effigy
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disbelief

0 posted 2004-01-12 10:45 PM




Sometimes I feel as though my hands might betray me.

“You know how it goes”

- it makes me do things I never wanted to do.

My eyes lie
               (but there not lazy).

“Their busy, making up the news.”

- they make me see things I never wanted to see.

Hearts flutter, skip beats, & deceive.

“Pace-makers are metronomes of death.”

- it steadily pumps out the venom.


[This message has been edited by Effigy (01-13-2004 12:47 AM).]

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2004-01-13 12:23 PM


Wes~

this is amazing.....good to see you posting...

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Kristin Eve
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since 2004-01-13
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2 posted 2004-01-13 01:24 AM


I really enjoy the visual aspect that comes along with your words. I am new... is this a technique you often use?
...me thinks i shall find out....

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