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Open Poetry #30

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Serra_Avatar
Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 58

0 posted 2004-01-12 09:16 PM

Starlight, star bright
Carry this message away tonight
Deliver its words into hands of light

Across sable skies
Through clouds of fireflies
Safly, to an angel’s eyes

These words my mind doth comprise
Written here, saved from a forgotten demise
Awaiting Morningstar’s arise

This one was another that I wrote to that very same girl which my first post talked about. I hadn't talked to her for a while. I really do miss speaking to her in the morning...Thus her nickname "Morningstar".

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-01-12 09:22 PM

Nice write. I hope you get your wish Ron.
Love is such a trial and tribulation at times.

Serra_Avatar
Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 58

2 posted 2004-01-12 09:31 PM

lol, I can see how it would be mistaken for romantic admiration. Shes my friend, but something written about her should have a little "love" in it.

thanks

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-01-12 11:13 PM

What sweet verses here!

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