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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-01-12 07:09 PM


Licensed to Touch


She showed me licenses
from China and Hong Kong
and Korea and Budapest.
I just sat there
mesmerized, feeling
her strong fingers
pushing against
my strong chest.
Of all the massages
I've received in
my life, this one
was the best.


JamesLee
January12
2004
I like the way she
says "I like you."

© Copyright 2004 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-01-13 12:04 PM


Short, strong!, and too the point!  
DavePage
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2 posted 2004-01-13 03:15 PM


I enjoyed your words and it is a relief to see someone write about life that is real and not sanitised.

I'd like to feel that in similar circumstances I might have had the language to see a license.

I just tried to treat every woman as a woman and a license was probably the last thing I was thinking of and hopefully I would walk away from the chickens around the shack the next morning

dave

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-01-13 06:16 PM


Thank you iliana and Dave for responding...James
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4 posted 2004-01-18 09:46 PM




(smiles) Oh James, this sounded like such a great massage, sweet friend, I like one every now and then at the chiropractor or at a salon to help rejuvenate my mind! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever
5 posted 2004-01-18 09:58 PM


Hmmmm...fully licensed and the best massage? Sounds like a return trip is called for...and, maybe a new poem?  Liked this...thanks!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
6 posted 2004-01-18 10:02 PM


I liked this poem.


Juju

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