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stevebrklynnyc
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0 posted 2004-01-12 06:55 PM


Mirrors of our soul

An endless lake of reflection

Waters are deep

Memories are forever

A kiss never once realized

A chance meeting

Regretts run deep

Take a chance on life

Someone is waiting

Time is running out

Wish you can see the future

Only to rely on a higher power

It must be true

Dreams get me through the night

A chance meeting

Make me whole

Life is full circle

Love is forever

Marry me


© Copyright 2004 Stephen Capp - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-01-12 07:03 PM


I hope that "Susan" says yes!!
stevebrklynnyc
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2 posted 2004-01-12 07:06 PM


I love her!!!
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-01-12 07:19 PM


is this for real ???

~smiling~ and waiting to see her reaction

M

stevebrklynnyc
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4 posted 2004-01-12 07:43 PM


I was not expecting this...

Of course the answer is yes.  

I love you.



(you left your name logged on my computer and I don't remember my password!)

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2004-01-12 08:21 PM


Congratulations Susan...I came back on just to see your answer
hugs and best wishes
Maureen

iliana
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6 posted 2004-01-12 11:55 PM


Wow -- what a proposal!  Congratulations you two!
Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2004-01-13 08:22 AM


Okay....on my name now.  

Steve~ Every line of the poem makes perfect sense to me, but you know that.  

You also know that I am ready to spend the rest of my life with you and the "brady bunch" (for those of you that don't know..we have 5 kids between us)

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2004-01-13 08:45 AM


Wow!!

hugs
M

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