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Remember Me (Senryu)
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Remember Me (Senryu) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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My last gift to you is a wish for love and peace. Please...remember me... I will sail my vessel until the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind these waters are my sky, I won't reach my destination if I never try... so I will sail my vessel until the river runs dry... (Garth) |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Giving beyond the very end. Well-written. ~McLean |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Simply beautiful and very touching. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit, Lovely, enjoyed |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
wonderful gift, lovely senyru Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how could anyone ever forget?  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Such a simple wish From one so honorable Your wish is granted |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice last gift...james |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
There could be no greater wish! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Aww Donna, this is a sincere parting gift to the one you wish. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely Donna, I am glad this one was brought back up as I missed it first time round. Hugs, Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Donna, this is beautiful, indeed. Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, I have no doubt that the person will remember such a sweet person as yourself.  Ethel |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna...Such a poignant ending.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Oh Donna, I know with all my heart this special someone will never forget you as no one forgets a golden heart as yours! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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chrissydome Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 73germany |
just wonderful! hugs! turning mirrors upside down won't make dust fall off the ground, hiding wounds won't ease the pain, sleep won't make you whole again... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes.....how could one ever forget  beautiful senryu Charisma |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful! Your sense of compassion is so very inspiring....~C |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I think ya'll are going to make me cry saying such nice things...  thanks so much. Goodbyes are often hard and Bluesy gal you hit the nail on the head with that one... it was written with nothing but well wishes for him straight from my heart, I can only hope he remembers me in a good way.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Honey, he can't forget the one person who changed his life ...this much. Unconditional love is rare. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
touching sweet lady....   ~*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
mum.... Lady Lauren...you touch... somh~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
they will remember even if not aware, for your presence in their life will always be there. Lovely |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah Lee...thank you so much... I appreciate you all so very much every day, but on days like these... thank God for this poetic family... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well, you are certainly a better person than me... I still wish them nothing..absolutely nothing.. Thank you."sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
no Susan not at all... I see a beautiful person in your soul! I am so grateful for the lessons that my dad taught me.. forgiveness begins within.. however hard it might be. You are lovely... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-21-2004 07:49 AM).] |
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