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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2004-01-12 09:41 AM

She's
not
you

but on the other hand

you're
not
her.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2004-01-12 09:42 AM

she better NOT be !!!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-01-12 10:32 AM

Oh this resulted in two good reads...the poem, and the fact that Helen is feeling better!

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

3 posted 2004-01-12 10:33 AM

I LOVE THIS! I love what it says, I love how it looks! Very creative, and simple and full!

~McLean

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

4 posted 2004-01-12 10:40 AM

Cute piece. I like the way you presented it. Very simple...yet with a deeper meaning ever so evident. There is difference yet balance. Well done.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-01-12 10:42 AM

James,
Cute, enjoyed the read.

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2004-01-12 11:00 AM

Love the one you're with ?.....
Remember the one who got you to who you're with....
Michelle

nothing
Junior Member

since 2004-01-10

Posts 23
Northumberland, UK

7 posted 2004-01-12 02:31 PM

Simple, elegant. Doesn't need anything more =D. Poetry refined down to a few perfect grains.

Making sense is overrated
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iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-01-12 04:43 PM

Clever, oh so clever!

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2004-01-12 04:54 PM

enjoyed

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2004-01-12 04:56 PM

Enjoyed this...and I too am glad to see Helen responding!
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

11 posted 2004-01-12 05:00 PM

Amen that!

Been worried about you, Slick One!

~~J

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2004-01-12 05:24 PM

And that truly says it all. *S* As mentioned before... there is elegance in these few words that say so much... excellent work! *S*

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