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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-01-12 07:54 AM



Was I Gone From His Thoughts

Is the past so easily forgotten
Had he not been missing me
Was I gone from his thoughts
Had he rid me from memory

He knows all that I had written
All my feelings were exposed
Was I gone from his thoughts
Maybe he as discarded those

He gave me reason for writing
His inspiration I often relied  
Was I gone from his thoughts
Were memories of me denied

He was that someone special
I know I loved beyond a doubt
Was I gone from his thoughts
Had he taken the easy way out

HopeĀ©2004

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Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2004-01-12 08:50 AM


Hope...Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing with us. Makes me ponder about other times & people...Paul

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HopeS
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2 posted 2004-01-12 09:29 AM


Thank you Paul for your kind reply , glad you enjoyed , I hope your pondering brought about happy thoughts
Hope

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3 posted 2004-01-12 04:05 PM


I dont know that we ever lose someone from our thoughts unless we want to

I would hope that thoughts can be understood but unkindly they are within one's head

I liked your words I liked the thought and the emotion that wrote them

Dave

iliana
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4 posted 2004-01-12 06:44 PM


Enjoyed reading this -- I think where there is that strong of a connection, they are never really gone.
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