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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-01-10 02:27 PM



This cold drives the you in me
to a warmer place, there
where only steam can rise
and fill the air with whispers
of the past, dreams of the future,
and the present never to be silenced.

Each night finds me
quilted in the consequences
of my moods, to dance in the dark
blending into shadows, repairing
the torn of my existence.

I smile to the eyes of the understood,
move to the rhythm of opportunity,
dream in perfect tense...
Then drift off slowly
into temptation.



"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-01-10 02:30 PM


wow...you sound like me...
ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2004-01-10 02:33 PM


such nakedthoughts ........


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-01-10 02:54 PM


Dxie, that's what "aloneness" does to one

Thank you Craig, how are you?

And yes they are very naked thoughts
~smiling~
M


*just trying to think of ways
to "feel" warm.

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