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Kazm
Member

since 2003-11-13

Posts 99

0 posted 2004-01-10 02:23 PM

The Change

Suddenly the room is shaped wrong. Or
am I
shaped
wrong?
We were comfortable, now nothing fits

Your eyes don't rest easy on me anymore;
    strange new angles
                       in your glance

Your voice surged from laughing friend
             to serious,
        to intense,
then something else

And so the world redefines us in an instant
no more easy
                  company
             our friendship opened like paint and
   spread to
cover this new       form,
      envelop this      new space,
color this new
love

Kaz

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-01-10 02:27 PM

comfort zones...gotta love 'em

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-01-10 02:39 PM

Very interesting write.

Always a problem with a friend who thinks they are more and not knowing whether they can ever whisper more.

Old pains erupting, changing personalities on trivia stoking fires.

If it is real - dont push someone to expload.

Dave

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2004-01-11 10:11 AM

The little change that changes everything forever...when friendship tips over the edge into love! I have been on the happy end of this, and alas I have watched helplessly from the sidelines while it brought me pain.

Sounds like yours was the good kind.

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-01-11 01:04 PM

Excellent
TD

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2004-01-11 05:44 PM

             our friendship opened like paint and
   spread to
cover this new       form,
      envelop this      new space,
color this new
love

I have watched for you to post again... and this was certainly worth the wait. *S* What a miracle it can be when friendship segues into love. *S*

Of course...when you're expecting love and realize that's not to be... that's not so much fun! *S*

Wonderful work!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2004-01-11 05:45 PM

nice read

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

7 posted 2004-01-11 05:49 PM

I especially enjoyed the metaphors here:

Suddenly the room is shaped wrong. Or
am I
shaped
wrong?
We were comfortable, now nothing fits
Your eyes don't rest easy on me anymore;
strange new angles
in your glance

Clever descriptions and an interesting take.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

angele
Junior Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 35
Malta (tiny island in the Med)

8 posted 2004-01-11 06:21 PM

I agree. Iloved the beginning of this..really grasped my attention and compelled me to continue reading

interesting format too

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-01-12 06:09 PM

Lovely -- and very interesting!

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

10 posted 2004-01-12 06:21 PM

,,,,,and so it grows
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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