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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-01-10 10:02 AM



To desire...sightless before
you.

My fingers ache in their
description.

Such things are simply too much for
the senses.

And belong only to the briefness of
a dream.

To desire...I close my eyes to the
day of your beauty.

Night is falling.

And my fingers ache to know
you.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-10 10:12 AM


"Night is falling.

And my fingers ache to know
you."


Perfect Eric!  Beautiful.
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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2 posted 2004-01-10 10:55 AM


*sigh* into my personal favorites library
garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-01-10 11:14 AM


A very beautiful and
sensual write, Eric.
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2004-01-10 12:23 PM


Ericc
Enjoyed the read.

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2004-01-10 12:44 PM


Ericc - aching is good, knowing is better. Nice thoughts in a nice write...

BC

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6 posted 2004-01-10 01:04 PM


Eric..as always, you make it sound SO good!
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7 posted 2004-01-10 01:23 PM


**mouth hanging open**
Suetang
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8 posted 2004-01-10 04:27 PM


Hello Eric

There was so much beauty within your words which I enjoyed immensely.

"If I never met him
I would have dreamed him into being"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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9 posted 2004-01-10 06:49 PM





Like sunbeams
your fingers
reach into the night sky
to caress and touch the moon
if only for a moment ...
just to start the dream
that will linger till dawn.


Stirring beauty, dear Eric!
I love you. Margherita


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10 posted 2004-01-11 11:09 AM


Hot stuff -- well done sir!

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11 posted 2004-01-11 05:39 PM


Oh, yes! *S* This is a sensual beauty. *S*
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12 posted 2004-01-11 05:40 PM


enjoyed
jaicie114
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13 posted 2004-01-13 08:17 AM


Dear One...

Your perception of love and beauty is only diminished by your personal radiance that shines through each and every word you share with us here. We are truly blessed. Thank you for all that you are!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

HopeS
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14 posted 2004-01-13 08:26 AM


Eric , sensuous desires so beautifully expressed , loved the title too

Hope

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15 posted 2004-01-13 08:45 AM


Do NOT take aspirin
for that ache!

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16 posted 2004-01-13 01:40 PM


Eric, this is amazing..
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17 posted 2004-01-18 09:53 PM




(smiles) This is so beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may you always see he daylight when you close your eyes and feel love in every heartbeat, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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In your dreams
18 posted 2004-01-18 10:05 PM


nice
ThisDiamond
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19 posted 2004-01-18 10:12 PM


Eric...
You write the most impassioned works I have ever read. Excellent. TD

iliana
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20 posted 2004-01-18 10:31 PM


Ericc -- wow... this was outstanding!  
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