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January White
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January White |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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January White  How slippery, night to day, week to month, [tongue to lips] and here you are, again… agitated, I do not look at day of month on any man-made calendar, no, I knew you were presenting yourself again, readying to peer down in winter white like a bride in tremble. I thought, perhaps, as systems decline, particularly and peculiarly, a woman’s, that so would the inner pull of tidal creep, but no… I am still woman and you still pull, sensations become taut till you wane again. But while you are here? Wax well, and warm my revelations. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is gorgeous, Karilea, simply gorgeous! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully written, Karilea. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!!! Eric |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
How slippery, night to day, week to month, [tongue to lips] and here you are, again… Karilea, you hooked me with this already! Now, to return and finish your poem! As I recall, you're a tea drinker. Will you accept my posted invitation to share a cup of tea? For the past three months with Passions I find there are lots of tea drinkers here and...lots of chances to learn about new blends. I'll return in a little while, after reading the rest. Until then, enjoy your cup of tea. Sadie |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Man, I wish I had written this! Love it Karilea! hugs, Chris "When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine, "How slippery, night to day, week to month," Nice, this idea is easy to grasp and fits so well with the rest. I love the way your mind works, Sunshine. "on any man-made calendar" "the inner pull of tidal creep" Yes, isn't there always a type of waning? "Wax well, and warm my revelations." Simply beautiful and well articulated. Sadelite |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, as so often with your poems, I am speechless as to what to say. All I can think of is Beautiful and that just doesn't seem enough.  Hugs  Ethel |
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