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icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2004-01-10 07:36 AM

silver threads of dawn

stars chase fading memories

elusive sleep sighs

©2003 by icebox

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-01-10 08:55 AM

As my pup sits her window
she says
thank you.

So do I.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-01-10 09:00 AM

icebox
And that is no winter surprise, good one.

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2004-01-10 09:04 AM

Poignant writing.

believe in what your heart feels...

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-01-10 10:32 AM

*sigh* .... into my library! hugs, Chris

"When someone loves you, the way they say your name is different. You know
that your name is safe in their mouth." Billy - age 4

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2004-01-10 11:33 AM

Interesting write. I've often wondered what they think about. What do they think about in the middle of the day?

Very much enjoyed!

Sadelite

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2004-01-10 11:54 AM

icebox...do you think sometimes it's worth it to stay awake, just so you can see the dawn? Sweet imagery...sad song.

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

7 posted 2004-01-10 11:59 AM

Ok, 5,7,5

Very nicely written. I've often wondered why our girl sleeps all day! I guess she's busy until the stars chase away the wake. I enjoyed this.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-01-10 02:47 PM

I knew I heard an echo in the wee hours

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-01-10 02:49 PM

silver threads of dawn
stars chase fading memories
elusive sleep sighs

Dawn's tapestry;
woven on the winter sky
thread-by-thread

~C

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

10 posted 2004-01-10 10:31 PM

Lovely. You say just enough to outline the picture and let me fill in the colors.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

11 posted 2004-01-10 10:41 PM

tis a lovely portrait painted on a tiny canvass that speaks volumes to the reader

well done...

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