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Wintery Thoughts |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Cancel drowsiness, sleep waits in the wings effect changes on processes before the spring... change to writes I note headed with bold epitaph poetic walks are liberated from support staffs... cancel the sleep but not the dream bring the vapour to steady steam set the water wheel in motion down the river road set life processes into action with new found loads induced thoughts about winter thaws, the ice that breaks to feed dried up river beds, their mud base cakes cancel sleep but not dreams arise steep and holy steam... away from winter's frozen means signs of drowsiness wait for sleep to blanket as poetic images tumble from malachite caskets poetry embalms the corpse preserves the body of course... [This message has been edited by wordwizard (01-11-2004 03:24 AM).] |
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harash Member
since 2003-12-27
Posts 99India |
beautiful words coming through your pen....a nice and cool write.. always harash |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
good way to survive the winter chill....with a warm write |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Martin, absolutely. Cancel the sleep but not the dream. And a warm dream too.  Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Looks like we're all awake tonight! Wonderful writing!  |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Am still awake myself after some painting/clubbing...thanks for sharing |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
may the river carve the course, let us laugh we'll bathe the tide... let us dance the dash of that laughing in white water lies... ooooh... grin. I'm ready. nicework. |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
A fine write, with such fine mystiques. Layered very nicely. Thank you. |
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