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Open Poetry #30
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Brad_Smith
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since 2004-01-09
Posts 70
Dallas, Texas
0 posted 2004-01-09 07:15 PM


Two verses I'd like to convey
if given the chance
"Im sorry, forgive me."
"would you care to dance?"
© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917
1 posted 2004-01-09 08:39 PM

Explore with a few more words.

You have a statement but this would be a deep South Ball or an old English one.

I'd love to see you explore this across different countries and even the "when we get to the middle of the row of women by the wall, we shake hands" of those looking to dance.

Dave
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2004-01-09 08:55 PM

Great opening lines.
TD
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