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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-01-09 06:58 PM


Caressed from the East
By God’s immortal feast
Sky
My sweet refrain
To a softer song
Amidst
Rain
Silhouetting my countenance
Future
Glory
A dream away
From this


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wintertao
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1 posted 2004-01-09 08:48 PM


very nice
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2004-01-09 08:57 PM


"A dream away from this"

Enjoyed the closing, it brought me right back to the beginning.
TD

DavePage
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3 posted 2004-01-09 09:05 PM


I admit my guilt and plead for mercy.

Caught out

Dave

Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-01-09 09:36 PM


takes the childs ditty, "rain, rain, go away", to the nth,,,I like
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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