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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Once upon a time you were my rock but now I have come to realize that through the passing of time the hardest stone can be compromised As the years slowly slip by and cycles of seasons spin around even the most solid of rocks can be c r u m b l e d to the ground....... ain't it funny? I think it's funny. I'm gonna laugh until I don't cry honey, cuz sheddin tears just ain't my style... but I guess I ought to miss you.... for a little while....{Toby Keith} |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep. A steel spine is better in some than in others... and some are totally without altogether. Good write, m'dear. |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
Boom! Yes, indeed, they can. McLean |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very true dear Donna. Well said m'friend. Hugs~ In the midst of winter.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
time and weather seems to crumble all eventually.. but some stones are more prone to being eroded than others.. some bear weight with grace and others crack under stress.. hard to know which you are building a foundation on sometimes |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
some walls go up, and others come down..... but all things can crumble... Thanks ya'll.... It was like a lighted match had been tossed into my soul it was like a dam had broken in my heart after taking every detour, getting lost and losing track so that even if I wanted to I could not find my way back.. after driving out the memory of the way things might have been, after I'd forgotten all about us.... the song remembers when....Tricia Yearwood. |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
Simply said. Thank you for sharing. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Isn't this the truth! I enjoyed your writing and reflection. Sadelite |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
i do know |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent write Donna. Miss You! hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna...it is some times easier to see the truth of little pieces...so hidden is the fragile nature inside a rock. I enjoyed this thought filled write. Hugs! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As the years slowly slip by and cycles of seasons spin around even the most solid of rocks can be c r u m b l e d to the ground....... So true, Donna. Hugs  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is so very true, sweet friend, and I would prefer not to be a rock, steel, or metal anyway as they can feel so hard and uncouth when one really needs a soft place to rest ones head! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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tavern wench Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 44 |
We can find strength from our friends. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I understand!   ~*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to all for your constant support and friendship, without ya'll I would be lost.. |
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