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Brad_Smith
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0 posted 2004-01-09 06:44 AM



Once love has made it's claim
in cute drunken playful game
we tickle to joy and I melt to her whim

Music and rhythm set the stage
for friends and lovers
found each in the page

Teach me your smile
all I desire
my trust and love I shall submit

Claim what has always been yours
of first time can still be pure
still to be given seed
take my heart in poetic need

Satin vision soft and demure
Hearts fused in a dance that cures
A bond unbroken we could not dismiss

Make real
Take heart

I submit to my lover's kiss

A start

in words unspoken
A look
A smile
never apart

the woman that giggles, in the shopping cart

© Copyright 2004 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-09 09:19 AM


wonderful
Terrina
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2 posted 2004-01-09 01:05 PM


this is excellent. I love the flow. Here and there, and you are all over, but you never lose it. I love that.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-01-09 01:08 PM


pretty neat flow to this
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-01-09 03:06 PM


I love this!
Hugs~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

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