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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-01-09 06:31 AM



Short and Sweet


behind the door
   where untold
the truth in naked
   takes its hold

painted clearly
   thoughts unfold
the gift of one
   is bowed in gold

contemplation
   waiting see
shimmering
   the whole of me

whispered words
   to threshhold lee
the now in tense
   once poetry

behind the door
   each side to meet
the inner sanctum
   hearts to beat

in clear perception
   pleasure's feat
imagination
   in replete.

This...short and sweet.


M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-09-2004 09:54 AM).]

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Brad_Smith
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1 posted 2004-01-09 06:48 AM


really like this short sweet and sensual
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2 posted 2004-01-09 09:03 AM


when the door opens
thoughts from behind
florish to reality
of beatin hearts
opened gifts
of imagination

good write M

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-01-09 09:05 AM


thank you Brad

Bernie, we posted together (had to reformat the lines that didn't work earlier.)

Good morning and thanks for the visit
M

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4 posted 2004-01-09 09:42 AM


Very nice indeed Maureen. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2004-01-09 09:57 AM


good morning and thanks Chris
hugs
M

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