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truth untold |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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behind the stages of the lonesome eyes the girl cries and cries with holding her emotions inside glass candy jar dreams about to be broken no one told her about this potion the potion of evil and devious ways of people that come to her in thenight the black hands of the rejection and the soul taker the salt shaker the peper the time no one told her it was going to be so hard no one told her it was going to be this time wake up again and turn the page nothing has said or what was thought just computer networks buzzing through cables and wires pixals menus nothing fits the world has gone mad with its melting clocks she never thought this is how the place with drop. again unedited fresh from the pc keyboard so their may be errors |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
very nicely penned. Sadelite |
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Terrina Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 166California |
This is great. It almost sounds as if you've been hurt by an internet lover. I could be way off, but I like to read poems once and see what they say to me. Very good. thanks for sharing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some things we learn the hard way I liked this write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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