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stevebrklynnyc
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since 2004-01-04
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GA, Camden

0 posted 2004-01-09 12:59 PM


Lifetimes spent searching

Futile in every endeavor

Hope is reality

Hope is cruel

Crashing waves in despair

Wishing for the chance

Beaches of solitude

Endless reaches of the soul

Sands of the past

Disappear in time

Only to remember embers of our soul

Burning forever, love never forgets

A glimpse from the past

A smile never meant to be


[This message has been edited by stevebrklynnyc (01-10-2004 10:50 AM).]

© Copyright 2004 Stephen Capp - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-01-09 01:01 AM


Stephen, welcome to Passions In Poetry.
I hope that you enjoy yourself here.
Please check your e-mail for a special greeting.
Thanks,
Ethel/garysgirl
Moderator/Passions In Poetry

iliana
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2 posted 2004-01-09 03:07 AM


Really well written!  However, so sad.
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-01-09 05:09 AM


sad but beautiful...just how I like them

Welcome to Passions!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-01-09 07:11 AM


Stephen - Welcome to Passions.  I see you enjoy constructive criticism!  Wonderful!  I'm sure you'll be looking into our Critical Analysis forum soon!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Michelle_loves_Mike
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5 posted 2004-01-09 08:00 AM


Welcome to Passions
Good write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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6 posted 2004-01-09 09:02 AM


Hi, and Welcome to Passions.  We are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

I grew up in GA I have many memories! Beautiful first post....


Kindly

Greeneyes~

~*~
In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes art

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
7 posted 2004-01-09 09:09 AM


"Burning forever, love never forgets"

I love that line...love doesn't forget and sometimes when it was denied...it demands to be recongized later....

Thank you for taking that right turn.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-01-09 09:12 AM


Welcome to Passions!
Very enjoyable first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

    In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
    an invincible summer.

Brad Majors
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9 posted 2004-01-09 09:18 AM


cool your in GA!
Nightshade
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10 posted 2004-01-09 09:34 AM


Welcome to the Passions family.
Enjoyed your first post.
Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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11 posted 2004-01-12 11:34 AM






(big angel hugs) Oh Stephen, this is a beautiful but sad debut, sweet friend, love never forgets and it is a bittersweet heartache to deal with, but know soon the embers will shine again in your heart as a firefly of true love illuminates your golden heart like the sun, yay! God Bless You, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Stephen, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stephen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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