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the dream |
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evolution2 New Member
since 2003-12-29
Posts 6 |
this night i always remember that night, it all started then one rogue kiss all my innocence gone our sweat blended in the heat of our passion your lips were sweet, like ecstasy when i tasted you, i tasted life wanting no more than you never enough of you your hair oh your hair i could hide in its scent it smelled like the dreams all the dreams id had of this moment the precursor this was it, life was in this moment the world melted away the dream all that was left, all that was real turning for you burning for you i love you i do |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I really enjoyed this, well done indead "your hair oh your hair i could hide in its scent it smelled like the dreams all the dreams id had of this moment" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ahhhhhhhh, romanticism is alive and well in the PiP Forums~ WELCOME~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
simple and sweet |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Well done, E2. This sums it all up so well. |
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