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wickedbeautifulpoetry
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0 posted 2004-01-08 06:32 PM


a simple glance
from you
sets me reeling
magically spinning
round and round
like a children’s plaything
but i can’t look you
in the eye
because then
i realize
that i cant have you
and all of my lies
to myself
are negated
by looking in your eyes
so i bow my head
or look away
and keep my fallacies
tucked inside
a special place—
a precious chamber
deep within my heart—
but what happens
when i look you in the eye?

© Copyright 2004 Katie - All Rights Reserved
wintertao
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1 posted 2004-01-08 06:34 PM


I likes it lots lots
lovejunkie
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2 posted 2004-01-08 06:40 PM


good as usual katie. what can i say? MEER MEER.

-steph the obsessed.

"All you need is love..." -The Beatles

wickedbeautifulpoetry
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since 2004-01-03
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3 posted 2004-01-08 06:41 PM


Muchas gracias wintertao and Steph.
Your replies are much appreciated!

-katie-


((MEER MEER)) <-for you, my Stephanie.

garysgirl
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4 posted 2004-01-09 12:47 PM


Katie, I enjoyed your poem.
Hugs  
Ethel

ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
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5 posted 2004-01-09 01:06 AM


so stirring, it could be any lover's feeling,
you have described it wondrerfully.
iwould have wished to write it myself.

iliana
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6 posted 2004-01-09 03:09 AM


I know the feeling well -- really liked this and will post one sometime in the future called "Blue Eyes" which I think you will identify with from the sounds of things.  
passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-01-09 04:56 AM


nice ending touch
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